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Tengen Toppa Spiraldrill!
« on: August 25, 2012, 06:01:45 am »

This is the ☼Story☼ of a dwarf destined to pierce the HFS.

There was a solitary hill among the overcrowded trees around Paintedevens. The sky was bright and clear. The skinny lone dwarf sitting on that hill, running his hand through his short black beard, felt like it was a truly good day. He was dressed in simple clothing that contained more holes than thread. He was barefoot today - whenever he went beneath the ceiling of the sky, he wanted to feel the grass and the warm soil on his feet. You could tell he didn't do it very often. His hands were massive, calloused and mangled like those of a dedicated miner. He was proud of his job.

The dwarf had never come to this place on his own until a few weeks ago. His brother - well, they were just friends but called each other that - had left in search of something. He refused to say what when he left. So now he was sitting here by himself. He wasn't really popular. He was a shy and timid dwarf, even when he was drinking.

As he was dozing off, something catched his attention and his eyes widened. He could see a tall dwarf with a long red beard coming out of the forest. Swiftly jumping on his feet, he made a mad dash straight towards the dwarf, joyfully yelling atop his lungs.
'BRO!'
The dwarf hadn't even slowed down when he collided with his returning brother and put his arms around him with all his might. Their bromance was truly strong. His bro simply pet him on his back lightly, smiling but not saying a word. The dwarf released his grip from his brother and looked at him expectingly.
'Did you find what you were looking for, bro?'
His friend simply continued smiling without saying a word and went past him, walking up the hill. With a puzzled expression, the dwarf decided he should simply follow him. He often did things like that just to seem more dramatic.

When his brother reached the top of the hill, he suddenly turned around,  his face adorned with an expression of boundless spirit and a fierce flame in his eyes. His whole body was stretched upward as he was bravely pointing towards the sky, challenging forgotten beasts, megabeasts, titans and the whole universe.
'LISTEN UP, SIMON! YOUR PICK IS THE ONE THAT SHALL PIERCE THE ADAMANTINE TUBE!'
Simon's eyes widened like never before and his face contorted to express his absolute horror at his brother's words. He's heard the stories.
'WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, BRO?! THAT'S INSANE!'
'No! I've decided! I found a place where the Gurren Brigade shall start a fortress! We will grow a mighty military of true heroes with a blazing soul and then colonize Hell itself! No longer will any miner in the world fear for the fate of his fortress as he digs out adamantite! We'll do this thanks to you, Simon! Your pick will make the first hole of our fortress and pierce through the earth to lead us to our destiny!' Kamina was merely talking but his booming voice had completely silenced Simon's shout of terror, his spirit had overcome the fear in his heart.

Simon simply stared at him blankly. He had no idea what he was getting himself into.
« Last Edit: August 25, 2012, 06:18:58 am by Iron Tea! »
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« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2012, 06:02:28 am »

The forest around them was covered in snow. The Gurren Brigade had gathered where they would found their very own fortress - Spiraldrill the Destined Citadel. A cold wind chilled them to the bone through their thick clothing and wicked noises could be heard throughout the forest. The seven stood in place and looked to the horizon. Only a few dozen meters from them, a rain of blood colored the snow. But they stood fast. Kamina, Simon, Yoko, Kittan, Leeron, Rossiu, Nia. They knew what horrors awaited them. They stood fast. There was a flame in their eyes.

Kamina and Simon looked each other, nodding and raising their picks. They took a few steps forward and looked at the ground. The Gurren Brigade was watching their backs in this fateful moment. The brothers raised their picks high into the air, shouting with all their might in unison.
'STRIKE...

THE EEEAAAAAAAARRRTH!!!'

Their picks came down with full force, piercing deep into the ground. And so Spiraldrill the Destined Citadel was founded. And so began a battle that would cost countless of lives and the full strength of dwarven kind.


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In just 3 years that ditch in the ground had grown to be a huge, prospering fortress. This will be known by history but only those who were there will ever understand the sacrifices that had to be made...

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The undead roamed these lands. None of the Gurren Brigade had yet to have any experience. They quickly realized that their first priority would be defense. As soon as they had dug out a sufficient place for themselves under the earth, they went on to create a wall and a raising bridge above the ground. They had brought no weapons other than their picks. For many months, they would have no materials to make weapons except for one - bones. That was the most abundant material in this place. A crossbow and bolts were fashioned for Yoko, while Simon and Kamina were the only ones who'd dare engage in melee combat in this forsaken place for a long time.

While they raced to complete their first priority of defense, a second danger was catching up on them - thirst and starvation. They had dug down to an empty cavern with a pond and began bringing up water to irrigate farms but the process was going slowly. There was a very real danger they might not make it but they managed. Food and drink was secured. They would never have to worry about this again.

Immigrants came to Spiraldrill. Some died. Among the deaths was also one that would change the Gurren Brigade and send gloom over the growing fortress for many months. Kamina bravely fought with the undead...and perished. The shock that his followers had to endure was made even worse when they went on to bury him and the other few who fell. They realized that the evil of this region spread even deep under the ground. Kamina and another dwarf rose from their coffins. Nobody had the nerve to fight these opponents. They were swiftly locked and then walled away before they could do any damage.

All of Kamina's duties were now on Simon's shoulders. The dwarf was truly traumatized by the event but he managed to lead the fortress further. Just barely. As the months went on, he slowly learned to cope and do all his duties but the pain didn't really go away. But the sacrifice he made in the form of enduring helped make the fortress prosper.

The dwarves started digging further and further away from the border to this evil place. They couldn't stand to see more of their friends rise up from the dead and attack them. Another outpost was made on the surface, this time much bigger.  The dwarves digged a ditch around the raising bridge and there was now a very narrow path leading inside. Then they built walls around the ditch and made yet another bridge. Fortifications were carved on the inner walls. The perfect chokepoint - they could trap their foes within and fire volleys of arrows on them if they so pleased.

Hematite was found deep underground. The dwarves wanted to pump up magma closer to the surface and smelt freely but nobody of the growing population was really familiar with the ways to do so. Instead massive woodcutting operations began. Iron armor and weaponry were created, outfitting the small military that was created. Simon led the first squad while Yoko led a squad of ranged soldiers. The sword became the favorite weapon of the fortress. Incidentally, Simon and Yoko ended up becoming lovers. Their blooming romance was a slight comfort for those who still felt the pain of Kamina's passing.

A second floor underground was already made and now a third one was being digged. Simon had a truly great plan. A center for the whole fortress that would be the envy of every other fortress. The center of the third floor would be full of engravings, statues and two shrines to Armok. This place would lead to everything else - to the left you could find all the workshops and stockpiles of the finest craftsmen, to the right you'd find your very own housing and the best place to drink and eat in the whole wicked region. And straight ahead you'd find a massive building which would house the fortress' leaders - a place from where they could oversee this prospering city. And underneath canals would be dug out which would be filled with water from the caverns deep under. There was even more to his plan. This was just the beginning. It was already an immense operation.

The military gained more and more experience. There were no casualties for a long while though some were crippled in one way or another. Then Tun died. A bolt from a goblin's crossbow went clean through her head. Behind her was her husband - Ashmon. Upon seeing his wife collapse to the ground lifelessly, he charged ahead in a mad rage, slaughtering the goblins with ease. His rage would last until his death. He became famous throughout the fortress during an ambush by fanatic elves. While the rest of the military was gearing up, he decided he didn't need much to kill a bunch of pansy elves and went ahead on his own with nothing but his shield and breastplate. He crushed nine elves to death with his shield before the others came to help. The few elves that survived were running for their lives. He was the champion that Spiraldrill deserved.

Dayakka went missing one day. The forest outside was engulfed in flames while he was outside. Everything was covered in ashes for weeks. Nobody knew what happened to Dayakka - no corpse was ever found. The fortress had many up and downs. It was slowly prospering more and more. Many dwarves were now becoming legendary in their crafts and all sorts of artifacts began to appear all around. But every now and then some tragedy would occur. A dwarf would be murdered as he went outside. A soldier would be crippled. Many of the civilians had scars, minor disabilities from injuries and kills to their name. The irony of this place - the harshness of it ensured only the strong would survive and at the same time it turned the weak into strong.

A frost wyrm came upon Spiraldrill one day. The bridges were intentionally lowered. The soldiers gathered outside and awaited it patiently. A great battle ensued but the victory felt very bitter. The guards from a human caravan intervened and stole the kill for themselves. One of the dwarves sacrificed his arm while fighting the beast and Spiraldrill would not tolerate this insult. The human caravan was butchered to the last man. Their equipment now bolstered the might of this fortress' small but specialized army.

The fortress soon became large enough for a mayor to be appointed. Simon was annoyed with having to conduct pointless meetings with elven diplomats and was glad to let another take this position while he concentrated on the military might of Spiraldrill. He felt it was not quite sufficient. Kittan was appointed Captain of The Boneguard - a lightly armored unit with crossbows which would upkeep the civil peace of the fortress. The "twin" to this squad was The Bone Bulwark. Simon still remembered how the bones of the dead were their only hope of defense when they first settled here and honored this fact. Armor out of bone was prepared for the new recruits who would be armed with pikes. They'd patrol all throughout Spiraldrill and be the first to engage any enemy. Simon and Yoko's squads were the sword - the Bone Bulwark was the shield.

They dug deeper and deeper. Simon decided that if they couldn't bring the magma to their workshops, they'll bring their workshops to the magma, no matter how deep it is. He knew his soldiers needed better armor soon. But he didn't realize how soon that would be.

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The stonecrafter didn't have any work queued up and was taking a stroll outside. Some complained about the constant snow and the cold but he didn't mind. He liked it. It relaxed him. That was the main reason he came all the way here. Yes, he liked the scenery. It felt so relaxing and serene. The dwarf closed his eyes and took in a very deep breath, filling up his lungs with the chilly air.

When he exhaled and opened his eyes, his shoulders slumped and his jaw dropped slightly. Countless crossbow bolts were flying straight towards him. Before he could react, his entire body was covered with them and blood was flowing out all across it. He was the first to fall. No dwarf in Spiraldrill would ever be the same again.
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« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2012, 06:03:22 am »

The spirits of the dwarven caravan were high, despite the deep cutting wind. Spiraldrill was a prosperous fortress. The merchants were sure that they would return to the Mountainhome rich but the truth was they wouldn't return at all.

For a moment, the sound of something cutting through the air could be heard and in the next, blood was splattered over one of the wagons. The poor merchant to which it belonged was now sprawled on the snow with a bolt sticking out of his eyesocket. Immediately many more projectiles were sent flying towards the caravan. A few unarmored merchants were struck and wounded but they all hurriedly hid on the other side of the wagons while the guards raised their shields and shrugged off the volley.

When their attackers, hidden amidst the snow-covered trees, paused to reload their crossbows, a few of the dwarven soldiers charged ahead and were met by a squad of goblins mounted on cave crawlers. The rest of the dwarves hurried to get the wagons moving and get inside the walls of Spiraldrill. The loud sounds of metal clashing and screams of both anger and pain could be heard behind them for a while but they soon died off. The dwarven soldiers were butchered to the last man.

Dwarves were running throughout the halls of Spiraldrill in a hurry to get their equipment together and rush out on the surface. The fortress had never faced such a threat before. Within a span of minutes numerous goblin ambushes were spotted. The guard on watch reported over a hundred goblins charging from all directions. The army of Spiraldrill numbered barely 15 of whom 3 were bedridden and 4 were still rookies. They had only one advantage - the perfect chokepoint that the fortifications of Spiraldrill provided.

Simon, Ashmon and Yoko rushed out together to help the wagons get inside. The enemy was already at their walls and they faced a sea of brook trolls. The spirits of the three fighters were high. Ashmon and Simon fought back to back like a storm of death, tearing the trolls limb from limb with their adamantine longswords while Yoko scored headshot after headshot with her crossbow from afar. The wagons were soon safely inside but the full force of the goblin army had finally gathered at their doorstep. Simon retreated while fighting back the invaders who tried to get inside together with one of the soldiers of the caravan and the first gate was raised. Ashmon however was lost amidst the chaos of battle.

He had lost his way during the battle and was deep behind the enemy lines. He was still fighting in a mad frenzy, cutting off limbs and piercing through enemies but he was surrounded by the goblin cavalry and soon overwhelmed. His corpse was made unrecognizable.

The full force of Spiraldrill had gathered together with the remaining soldiers of the caravan. The crossbowdwarves took their position on the fortifications while the infantry made a line behind the inner gate. The outer bridge was suddenly lowered, crushing a few dumb goblins as it did so, and the invaders sallied forth into the chokepoint, the bridge raising behind them. The dwarves began firing volley after volley of bolts from the fortifications and soon the inner bridge lowered for the infantry to charged outside and meet their opponents in melee combat.

Barely 10 soldiers against a force now numbering 70 goblins. The battle was short and brutal. The dwarves were quickly pushed back inside. The bridge was quickly raised as to not let in anymore invaders but the ones who did get in quickly cut down the remaining dwarves. The goblin cavalry didn't even stop to make sure they killed everyone - the rushed ahead to the entrance to the fortress proper, knocking the door down and descending under the ground on their cave crawlers. Yoko abandoned the fortifications and ran to chase after them. She ran through a courtyard of corpses and severed bodyparts - the few survivors were badly wounded and trying to crawl away in an unknown direction. There was no sign of Simon.

Yoko signified her entrance into the halls of Spiraldrill with a bolt to the spine of a mounted goblin. The enemy was running rampant throughout the narrow corridors. A few wounded or dead rookie defenders of the fortress could be seen lying against the walls. The advance of the invaders was halted by the dozens of war dogs of Spiraldrill and a few enraged civilians who somehow managed to stop the charge dead in its tracks.

Yoko went through the fortress, crossbow in one hand and sword in the other, shooting and cutting down every goblin in her wake. She had truly become the most skilled fighter of Spiraldrill. Soon the sounds of battle had stopped. The hallway was completely covered in blood and the corpses of dwarves, goblins, dogs, cave crawlers and even a drake. But the battle wasn't over. There were still more enemies trapped between the bridges above. But what had happened to Simon?

He was pinned against the ground in the ditch where the invaders were waiting from something to happen. He was struggling with all his might against the cave crawlers keeping him down and chipping away at him but it was fruitless. He couldn't even feel what he was doing. His body was shattered. He couldn't tell what was broken anymore and whether there was anything missing.

The bridge dropped down on a few goblins with a loud crash and splat. The remaining invaders immediately rushed inside. Simon rolled around on the ground for a while in a pointless struggle before passing out.

When he came to, he was in a bed in the hospital area. It was crowded with heavily injured dwarves and their blood was smeared all over the floor and beds.The hustle and bustle of work could be heard outside and somewhere further off in the distance there were faint sounds of battle.

The last goblins were dead but had managed to get too deep inside the fortress. The corpses littered the area where the dead always rose up again. Before they could all be carried away, some had already become undead. The dwarves did everything they could to seal them off but it their ranks swelled and swelled and managed to get through before being completely trapped.

Simon had managed to crawl outside of the room - his legs wouldn't listen to him. The halls of the fortress were even worse. Spiraldrill had become a true slaughterhouse. Simon started crawling towards the exit. He himself was covered in blood - he still couldn't tell where he was injured other han his legs and how much of the blood was his. Slowly but surely he was going towards the exit. He was already at his limit but he kept going on. Meanwhile dwarves were running around him and a few crippled undead were hobbling along. Simon was avoiding undeath just barely. Suddenly someone grabbed him from under his arms, hoisted him up and continued running.
'Don't worry! We'll make it!'
Simon was losing conciousness again. The last thing he saw before passing out was a corridor full of undead and the last thing he heard were screams of terror from the room he had just gotten out of.

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The few survivors would soon leave the sight of Spiraldrill behind. Simon raised his head from the stretcher on which he was being carried as much as he could, staring at Spiraldrill defiantly. He would come again. He could still go on. This won't be the end.
« Last Edit: August 25, 2012, 10:09:07 am by Iron Tea! »
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« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2012, 06:04:03 am »

Not sure whether the lack of response is to mean these forums are slow, actual stories have little interest in them compared to hilarious succession forts, the TTGL inspiration is leaving everyone in the dark or I just did very poorly on this piece. I'll definitely be reclaiming since this IS inspired by TTGL after all but not sure if I'll continue the story.
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« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2012, 03:29:26 pm »

Cool story, dwo.  :D
Would be nice having illustrations (screenshots) of this events.
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« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2012, 03:49:25 pm »

I did take a few screenshots actually. When I opened the unit list and saw the number of invaders I knew I had to screenshot the hell out of that battle.

 

Caravan that got slaughtered while entering:



The enemy pouring towards the gate:



Midbattle, the goblins trapped there while our forces get their shit together:



The corridor was full of blood.



I was greeted by a fucking nightmare when I went on to reclaim:

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« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2012, 04:10:34 pm »

Ha! That was pretty good! Also, welcome to the forums.

Definitely include more screenshots in the future! That was such a badass story that I'd have loved to see the actual game play out alongside the text  :D

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« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2012, 04:23:44 pm »

Haha, I'll keep the screenshot part in mind. I might continue writing the story of this. After I mod in some things such as Ascended Adamantite and nearly indestructible horrors deep down in the HFS. I've got some nifty ideas where to go with this.
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« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2012, 04:42:43 pm »

Haha, I'll keep the screenshot part in mind. I might continue writing the story of this. After I mod in some things such as Ascended Adamantite and nearly indestructible horrors deep down in the HFS. I've got some nifty ideas where to go with this.
I definitely look forward to it--very solid first go! I always love this kind of thing. Also, Tales from the Fortress might be a good place to submit your story, if you haven't already  :)