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Forum Games and Roleplaying / Re: enclosed
« on: April 04, 2021, 06:11:08 pm »
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Say, I guess she does! I wasn't going for that, no, but it IS supposed to be a jumpsuit that she would wear under a space suit, so it makes sense that it would be a similar style of clothing. The hair and suit colour schemes matching Samus's is a total coincidence, though.Some characters for a webcomic that may or may not ever exist. Any thoughts, advices, and/or criticisms would be awesome!
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The girl is an experienced time explorer who doesn't really care about the Society's (the Time Changer's Society, that is) rules. The guy, a newbie, is uncomfortable with working in the field and just wants to go back to his lab. Through an unfortunate turn of events she ends up dead and he ends up thrown into the Neverspace between times, searching for a way to bring her back while fending off eldritch monstrosities and discovering strange forgotten places.
Hilarity ensues.
She looks a lot like Samus, is that what you were going for?
-snip-Hey, those are nice and branchy indeed! One thing that might help improve their branchness is tossing in a few knots, but they're already quite good!
If anyone has tips on how to make this look more like branches, I'd appreciate that. I know the thin twigs look too much like veins at the moment, and there are a couple of spots where the forks aren't proper branch forks, but otherwise I'm not quite sure what's up. A couple of them are probably too head-y at the ends, too.
It took me quite a while to work out what was going on with the ice-cream (that is an ice-cream, right?), and her left shoulder seems to be MIA, but otherwise I like it. Your limited-palette work is still good!Oh... so she isn't holding a bleeding dragon tooth moments after tearing it from its place in a fiery maw? Darn.
I'm absolutely loving this story and your style of art and writing is fantastic, I'm eager to see where this all leads+1+1 Answers sound good? Scary void less so? And CLAX doesn't look so good right now :I+1+1Oo-er.And mayyybe go back to the radio and ask what the hell is going on. We obviously can't do anything not migraine-inducing out here.
>Back inside back inside back inside
Actually, carry robot buddy with us, stick it right next to radio, sternly ask answers (with adjusting an apology to our mood and character because Maria makes sense and we aren't really jerks)
+1I guess this is us now.Oh shoot! our antenna is gone!
Quickly! we must find the culprit!
Keep the weapon, we will use it against the thief!
Go to the job site.
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Grab one of the metal bars for ourselves, then go find Friend Robot and describe the items we found, and ask whether he'd like to eat any of them.+1
Oh dear god, It's Derm, run while you still have the chance!+1Name: Nullaria+1
Gender: Female.