((Could you split your wall into paragraphs, or at least new lines, especially the
a/b/c and 1/2/3 bits? My eyes want to escape every time I try to read it. No offence to you personally. PS: a key for a/b/c would also help.
To be continued when I actually read it and formulate a responce.))
"Well, no need to do these things like RIGHT NOW. I'm just putting the idea out there. Our objective is to make a scouting run, remember? Green team and red team have already started exploring their second sector and we're still on our first. Granted, ours is one of the most dangerous, but that's all the more reason to not delay and find a safe path through zone 3."
"One, this is not a race. Two, the reason were behind is because we bumped into the Red's anomaly while exploring. The drone you sent mapped their sector, and plenty of it too.
And the dust gun in particular would actually ease things up a lot, even if Piecewise does not reflect on it. I don't know about you, but at the grand age of 46, my back is very sore from bending down and picking up those rocks. So I would appreciate anything that would allow me not to bend down to pick something up every 5 meters. And you over 60 aren't you? Shouldn't it be worse for you? Maybe it's your mining suit, or maybe you're just more fit..."((Ok, I think I understand better what you meant. I must have been thinking of something else which we did mention or discuss. And I specifically
avoided accusing you of claiming these ideas as your own, since you didn't actually say it. But since you mentioned it, remember that you always have to filter that stuff through the lens of our DM. I don't know if the ideas are actually worth much, or if it's the person who makes stuff who makes them who's the winner, but it's also may be who's the loudest in talking about it.... Still not accusing you of anything.
And I think you don't think you really have to worry about the tokens at this point. You're probably getting a bonus for excessive notekeeping.
PS: Regarding me mentioning Piecewise in my dialogue. Yes, I broke the fourth wall. Yes, I will do it again when I feel it fits. No, it will not be as bad as Homestuck. I am aiming at something similar to the Order of The Stick, but significantly tamer. Basically I am
a): trying to avoid saying something in a convoluted way, and then having to attach an OOC explanation, and
b): sometimes I may do it for humor. ))