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Reader count!  Do you read TLCM?  If so, pick your favorite character below!

Misty Kolnazom, the Greatest Cheesemaker Ever!
Reg Pashmad the Recruit
Gruzzlus Holt the Captain
Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man
Kulet Lokunnomel the Nun
Enir Twigappears the Overseer
Darkerdaffodil the Elf
Maynard the Mule
Other
Iron Owl the Iron Knight

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Author Topic: The Littlest Cheesemaker - Updated 8/26  (Read 931245 times)

WillowLuman

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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1950 on: November 04, 2014, 12:58:46 am »

BREAK ITS FINGERS! Grab the hand that's grabbing you and break them fingers!

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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1951 on: November 04, 2014, 02:26:40 am »

CAST ROCK SPIRE! BE THE DWARVEN MAGE!
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1952 on: November 04, 2014, 03:04:30 am »

Divine intervention via gnome falling from sky onto the night creature. 
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1953 on: November 04, 2014, 03:05:36 am »

Oh dear god, it's a chryssalid.
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1954 on: November 04, 2014, 06:34:45 am »

Oh dear god, it's a chryssalid.

Actually, bloody hell, what /is/ that? A Bebilith, maybe?

Anyway, suggestion time.

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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1955 on: November 04, 2014, 06:51:30 am »

Oh dear god, it's a chryssalid.

Actually, bloody hell, what /is/ that? A Bebilith, maybe?

To save on future speculation, it's supposed to be a procedurely generated night troll/creature.  I realize that having to actually explain it outside of the story reflects poorly on my skills as an author.  That's what I get for rushing an update. :(

Im sorry guys, I was really struggling with this one.  I had always intended for it to be a night troll/creature thing, but I probably should have jumped on one of the suggestions you guys threw out instead.  Even the art in this update is below par; I'm not happy with any of it.  I can do better and I should do better.  I think I might just scrub this update and try over again, I'm too unsatisfied with it and if I don't fix it now I never will.
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1956 on: November 04, 2014, 07:40:10 am »

Oh dear god, it's a chryssalid.

Actually, bloody hell, what /is/ that? A Bebilith, maybe?

To save on future speculation, it's supposed to be a procedurely generated night troll/creature.  I realize that having to actually explain it outside of the story reflects poorly on my skills as an author.  That's what I get for rushing an update. :(

Im sorry guys, I was really struggling with this one.  I had always intended for it to be a night troll/creature thing, but I probably should have jumped on one of the suggestions you guys threw out instead.  Even the art in this update is below par; I'm not happy with any of it.  I can do better and I should do better.  I think I might just scrub this update and try over again, I'm too unsatisfied with it and if I don't fix it now I never will.
Don't be too harsh on yourself ES, you're doing good work over here. Please understand I was not questioning your artstyle or writing, but simply asking out of my ignorance on Masterwork's night creatures.

However, the work is yours and I'm sure no one will mind if you re-do it, should that be for your own comfort as an author.

Again, don't be too harsh on yourself, friendo. Keep up the good work! :)
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1957 on: November 04, 2014, 09:58:13 am »

Night trolls are random, the only thing that prevent such speculation ingame is that they speak, "Haha, I am a night troll, now have fun looking at me!".
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1958 on: November 04, 2014, 10:04:33 am »

I had always intended for it to be a night troll/creature thing, but I probably should have jumped on one of the suggestions you guys threw out instead.
Okay, so this is a chance to clear up some of that confusion I've been feeling: This story is only partly interactive, then?
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1959 on: November 04, 2014, 10:37:43 am »

I had always intended for it to be a night troll/creature thing, but I probably should have jumped on one of the suggestions you guys threw out instead.
Okay, so this is a chance to clear up some of that confusion I've been feeling: This story is only partly interactive, then?

If I let my players interact completely free in my rpgs it would be 8 hours sessions of dicking with everything that may or may not exist in one room.
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1960 on: November 04, 2014, 10:48:03 am »

Okay, so this is a chance to clear up some of that confusion I've been feeling: This story is only partly interactive, then?
Well, I haven't seen the update, but if we had full controll over the characters and what happened to them, it'd be less of an interactive story and more someone drawing whatever random crap we post.
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1961 on: November 04, 2014, 10:56:49 am »

Pretend it is a Kobold and enter martial trance.

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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1962 on: November 04, 2014, 12:42:30 pm »

I have nothing to say.
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1963 on: November 04, 2014, 02:51:38 pm »

  I think I might just scrub this update and try over again, I'm too unsatisfied with it and if I don't fix it now I never will.

I'm sad the update disappeared without me seeing it but I respect you holding yourself to high standards.

If only I did the same  ;)
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Re: The Littlest Cheesemaker (Illustrated Interactive Story) Update 11/3
« Reply #1964 on: November 04, 2014, 03:12:15 pm »

I have nothing to say.

Not the update we wanted, it's the update we.... FANORD
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