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Superdorf

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Re: McCreary's Planet
« Reply #90 on: February 16, 2020, 10:57:36 pm »

Well, let's get cracking! Regardless of what we decide over the whole temple contract thing, it'll be nice to have a bit of pocket change on hand.
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« Reply #91 on: February 16, 2020, 11:37:16 pm »

Not exactly glorious work, but it's honest and it pays.

Well, let's get cracking! Regardless of what we decide over the whole temple contract thing, it'll be nice to have a bit of pocket change on hand.
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« Reply #92 on: February 17, 2020, 12:36:49 am »

Not exactly glorious work, but it's honest and it pays.

Also, we seem to be really good at it. Angelic muscle for the win! :))
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« Reply #93 on: February 17, 2020, 02:57:00 am »

[15]Taking quick stock of the situation, you notice four large poles on each point of a rather large square. There is metal beneath the boxes, elevated off the concrete. The platform itself has several points of entry on the base, extending halfway through, you would guess. The poles have lines painted with [stack to here]. A pile of crates lies flush with that point.

So, you begin to work. Pallet-jacks drop off more and more of the crates, and you focus on loading them up to that point. You have to clamber atop some of the other boxes to stack them up. The work, while not difficult, begins to take its strain, and by the time the lunch bell whistles, you've worked up a good sweat, your muscles burning with exertion. Your coat sits on a stump of concrete.

[18+1]Overseer John comes back, and you notice a faint look of awe on his face. You've filled the platform up about halfway, all told. The pallet-jacks have been coming too slow for you to continue working at breakneck speed, the backlog has cleared.

"I'm genuinely surprised. Come, I'll show you to the lunchroom and storage lockers. Meals cost [.06 credits], and are taken out of your pay if you decide to eat. An accountant will log you as being present during meal-time. The meals are filling but simple and salty. Drink plenty of water." He explains as you follow along, catching your breath with the slow walk. He brings you into a room filled with tables, centered around a large kitchen. A chef hurries from cook to cook, examining various pots, and directing the staff. The employees themselves dish out their food, filling plates, and rushing to a table.

An accountant notices you, glancing at John, who shakes his head. "Her name is Pheobe, but her meal is free today."

Food, glorious food! Free food, at that.

The meals are indeed simple — a pot of porridge consisting of [grainmeal] and various fruits. There's a gravy with ground chunks of [meat] and vegetables. You heap it over a batch of fried potatoes that drip with oil and salt. You grab a few plates, pile them haphazardly on a tray, and find an empty table.

You devour your meal, the Overseer watching with amusement. He takes a specially marked tray from a heating window and sits down across from you.

"We might have to charge you more if you continue eating like that. Just a warning."

His meal is far from simple. A beautifully trimmed center cut of [meat] loin, with a herby sauce, coupled with shredded potatoes and a heaping amount of vegetables. A small dessert sits on the tray next to him, something that resembles [jello], filled with chunks of fruit and topped with whipped sour cream.

[10]"So, you must work here for a week at the least, before receiving your first paycheck. After that, you will be allowed to draw it out whenever you'd like. If those terms don't work, you will have today's paycheck given to you, but no other. I'm still waiting on a replacement from the capital, so if you don't show up tomorrow, I won't hire you."

You shovel a spoonful of the [grainmeal] and fruit into your mouth and nod.

"Regardless of your plans for tomorrow, I expect you to work four more hours and assist with the Departure." He states bluntly.

You nod, rising to grab a few glasses of water, which you down in a hurry. Just like that, the bell rings out, and the Overseer hurries to finish his meal. You do the same, stacking the dishes up with the rest and heading back to your station. A bunch more pallet jacks arrive, and you're back to work.

[13] After the next four hours, you are breathing hard, leaning against a pillar. Overseer John stands nearby, looking at the platform. He seems disappointed, not in you, no, he pays you no mind. You suspect because the platform is only three-fourths of the way full of crates. But you had to loiter for an hour, unable to do anything else for lack of materials.

A hum begins to fill the air, and you notice a shadow approaching from the west. A large hover-ship, or something much like it, come to a steady stop overhead. A platform is dropped down slowly from the middle of the craft from heavy tethers. It's filled to the line with crates of foodstuffs, bags of grain, and gently thawing iceboxes.

Then the vehicle itself adjusts. And slowly, slowly, it begins to descend, small VTOL engines assisting with minute bursts of blue fire. Tethers drop-down, hovering over the poles of the full platform. They attach and begin to lift it into the sky. When it reaches the bottom of the hover-craft, mechanisms lock the platform into place.

The Overseer makes you back up, and the VTOL engines push out more power, kicking up dust. Then, its primary drivers activate, and it speeds off east-wards, eating through the rising clouds.

[16] Overseer John claps you on the back, and sets off, but not before pointing to a small building in the corner. "Accountant office is over there. You've worked hard enough today. Don't worry about helping with the unloading. I don't want to pay you anymore anyway."

He doesn't say goodnight, instead of helping to direct the flow of goods leaving into the town.  You notice employees forming up to buy [grainmeal], [protein], and various [vegetables], speaking with accountants. Prices must be better than going through one of the local farmers, then.

You slip your heavy duster back on and slide your hands into your pockets.



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Re: McCreary's Planet
« Reply #94 on: February 17, 2020, 03:16:36 am »

Let's cash out and return to the church.
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Re: McCreary's Planet
« Reply #95 on: February 17, 2020, 06:50:12 am »

Continue working ignore this, real vote here
Let's cash out and return to the church.
+1 Honest work, but we need a bit more excitement
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Re: McCreary's Planet
« Reply #96 on: February 17, 2020, 07:44:47 am »

Let's cash out and return to the church.
+1 Honest work, but we need a bit more excitement
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Re: McCreary's Planet
« Reply #97 on: February 17, 2020, 08:06:11 am »

Let's cash out and return to the church.
+1 Honest work, but we need a bit more excitement
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« Reply #98 on: February 17, 2020, 10:26:01 am »

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« Reply #99 on: February 17, 2020, 06:16:25 pm »

The compound's accountant hands you over a folded wad of bills. You count through it, your mind tallying it into units you understand, and yes, it is all there. You smile at her, shoving it into your back pocket, and head out into the streets. The humidity that made work so exhausting once again vanishes, leaving only a faint chill in the air that forbodes rain. Clouds above you support this hypothesis.

As you pass by the public house on your way to the church, you notice just how much of a crowd it has. More than half of the village seems to be in attendance, drinking away their problems and making merry. The amount of armed individuals has also increased more and more people openly wearing firearms. Even the locals seem to be carrying whatever they can. The whole situation feels a bit tense, so you hurry past.

The church doors are shut tight for the night, and you have to pound on them for a solid minute before Brother John pries them open. He glances down at you with a raised brow, before stepping aside and beckoning you.

Mother Nicole is sitting at her desk, contemplating a glass of wine and a pile of paperwork. The former with far more interest than the latter. She looks up at you when you enter, and gives you a cheerful smile. "Ah, Pheobe. Wonderful. I was worried you wouldn't show."

"Sign it Pheobe Gainer, or whatever you want your first name to be. Gainer is the important part." She slides the contract and a pen over to you.



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Re: McCreary's Planet
« Reply #100 on: February 17, 2020, 06:19:38 pm »

Read the contract. I don't want to sign something we've not checked for fine print first!
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« Reply #101 on: February 17, 2020, 06:37:28 pm »

We've already read the contract:

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She pulls a paper from a nearby book, pushing it over to you.  Its a relatively simple contract, however deeply crouched in linguistic backflips it might be. You belong to the Scholars. In return, and commensurate with your rank within the organization, you will be provided with room, board, and food. After twenty-five years, you will be allowed to open a private enterprise or a new church, freed from your bonds, but still bound to secrecy about anything you've learned. You will be allowed to teach a certain number of individuals your skills. The legal jargon makes your head buzz worse than usual when you read it.

Failure to comply with a direct order, yadda yadda, may result in a punishment depending on the severity of the offense, up to execution. Jail time is also listed, as is being 'exiled from the blessing of the SEED.'
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« Reply #102 on: February 17, 2020, 06:42:00 pm »

Read the contract. I don't want to sign something we've not checked for fine print first!

Damn your eyes!  :P



The signatory hereafter referred to apprentice, is required to follow all commands presented by senior members of the Brotherhood, unless such orders are unlawful, harm the organization, or present greater than an average danger to the apprentice. Exceptions apply, to be examined later if such a conflict of interest is expressed to another superior [officer]. Insubordination is considered not following a direct order to the best of one's ability. It is punishable with the suspension of duty, flogging, branding, imprisonment, banishment, or execution, depending on the severity of the situation and any other factors to be determined by a tribunal of either superior officers or elders.

All secrets, patents, and procedures within the Brotherhood are to be held with the greatest secrecy unless permission is granted through form 12-b to apprentice or senior members. Failure to comply will result in death. If you have any doubts about the confidentiality of a particular concept or procedure, don't share it.

The apprentice is required to serve for a mandatory twenty-five years to receive full benefits, which include a pension, retirement posting, and comprehensive healthcare. Desertion is considered being absent without leave for longer than [1 hour]. It is punishable with imprisonment, banishment, or execution, depending on the severity of the situation and any other factors to be determined by a tribunal.

Apprentices, up until first posting, will receive food, board, medical care, and a salary of [.025 credits] per week, to be paid after the first week. Further benefits based on assignments and posting but generally include food, board, and medical care. Salaries are dependent on work performed, bonuses, etc. All further offers will be presented in new contracts with the apprentice.

I, Apprentice __________________________, promise to uphold my contract to the best of my abilities, accepting all benefits and punishments accordingly. I swear to promote the Great Work in all its efforts; to bring life to this barren world and to eradicate the [demons] that would seek to hinder it.


That's about the summary of it. Legal jargon, form references, table references, and local legalese cloud a lot of it, but you understand the gist of it.



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« Reply #103 on: February 17, 2020, 06:49:23 pm »

...or not.  Hmm.  A 25-year commitment is quite lengthy.
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« Reply #104 on: February 17, 2020, 06:54:27 pm »

...or not.  Hmm.  A 25-year commitment is quite lengthy.

Timeskips will be employed through boring parts, for example, the majority of the academy, if nothing interesting happens. And so on!

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